Kiriban-Adraowen

Your artwork is fine but there are some things I had to be straightforward at.
For one, there's the anatomy. The head looks like its a bowling ball with a face and a wig. No offense. It's too big for her body, for goodness' sake!
Then, the coloring and shading! I really can't tell where are the shadows supposed to be. And with that, it affected your coloring.
I appreciate your efforts for that "two years" of hard work and all. I'm sure you could do better next time and I know you can.
Peace, man! I'm out! Bye and do better next time.